Friday, September 28, 2012

Cocoon's realization

That’s difficult to say, if I write today
sowing pearls on sand and dreaming oasis in blur
or with a note of realization, streamed with a tiring bliss
but moments are saved
timeless moments in a cocoon as I break the strings
to count the drops of freedom,
to listen to the bird of west.

The colorless persona of my day
did not keep you at night,
It was like a brew, too cold to be sweet,
too coalesced to be enjoyed by me
but I long for it
and when I asked you to bring it for me,
you declined.

Now I sing blues around the occupied street
watching the brown rage melting down my temples,
seizing the edges of my mouth
as if it were awaiting a gothic second
to send its good bye
making up the paleness
all over again.

12 comments:

Minko said...
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Minko said...

I feel a little queer, standing under the torrent of these words. Taken together, they present rather an apocalyptic view of reality. But, each one of these words, and phrases, carry the burden of despondence. And, they seem not a little confused!
Surely, I'm not reading too much between the lines!
And, if I may, what exactly is a gothic second? :-)

Amrit Sinha said...

It's such a nice poem, in memory of some one who bid you farewell long back. People go, but the memories remain !!!

Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/ said...

profoundly beautiful lines

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