tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486908498401156522.post2953832804564840577..comments2023-05-22T21:39:03.193+05:30Comments on Absinthe Fever: LustMonikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15844893934428524824noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486908498401156522.post-60068406899445043262011-10-22T13:30:38.473+05:302011-10-22T13:30:38.473+05:30Lovely indeed.... Your poem evokes the understand...Lovely indeed.... Your poem evokes the understanding of one's own wants, desire..... Art does not need a reason, like love and lust, it simply exists, it just is and we are only witnesses to it. Your quote of the poem from Pablo Neruda, "Poetry Arrived" says that so well... But there is another part of that poem I find especially revealing about this gift we share:<br /><br />"and I wrote the first faint line,<br />faint, without substance, pure<br />nonsense,<br />pure wisdom<br />of someone who knows nothing,<br />and suddenly I saw<br />the heavens<br />unfastened<br />and open...."<br /><br />And from that moment, from that birth of passion, life takes on new meaning...... <br /><br />I find nothing of perversion in your poem. My only suggestion is to change that word to "Wonder," both in the title and the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486908498401156522.post-33381739490490439082011-10-20T07:59:56.489+05:302011-10-20T07:59:56.489+05:30life is a game, but it does cost pains and time to...life is a game, but it does cost pains and time to learn and grow.<br /><br />take care.<br />keep poeticizing.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486908498401156522.post-63130228998894315932011-10-20T00:46:35.515+05:302011-10-20T00:46:35.515+05:30Very interesting poem. I can feel the need in your...Very interesting poem. I can feel the need in your words but am not so sure what you are trying to say. Well written.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4486908498401156522.post-73655330896375814392011-10-19T17:38:34.671+05:302011-10-19T17:38:34.671+05:30nice...i feel the longing in your words...and of p...nice...i feel the longing in your words...and of playing the game and coming up empty...so settling for lust in the end...nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com