Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Broken yet complete

The pile of dust on the Irish carpet, I thought
of love to be that dust,
Like a unwanted desire to be wanted,
As if it’s all about surrendering your worth
to a pedlar or
letting a clown paint your face and mock at it
inartistically.

It was a tip- tap game, with millions of buffaloes
on a cliff, stampeding off,
or an exam, as essential as your life but
you are destined to fall, and poorly, even from a
table as high as a five year old – fall.

I hate sun and it lives on my head
I hate rains and they believe I am their partner.

This is what, the whole scheme was written for,
by a wise, wise** shrewd old man,
to break the youthful heart
into the whims of a witch, delicately savouring its
pieces,
feeding on its fleshly life.

7 comments:

Susie Swanson said...

This is so beautiful and it touched my heart. You really do dance with words...Susie

Brian Miller said...

this is a beautiful write, painful at points but your metaphors in the first part are clear and intricate all together...and the heart is there...love is....

M said...

Thanks Brian, yes the heart is all love.
Thanks Susie, I am glad you like my writings.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Interesting,
Love is vague and the most beautiful undefined
definition of it
is knowing-
everything you felt was wrong.
There lies the source of my words, perennial,
outrageous,
broken yet complete


And yet, I found it more abstract with each para from a different dimension, but on the same emotion.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Andreas said...

"Broken yet complete". I suppose we're all broken - life breaks and bends our hearts and minds - but maybe - also - complete, from the very beginning, in ways we can't quite see.

"from a table as high as a five year old". What a wonderful description! Very telling. It makes me smile, even with the fall.

Jinksy said...

I think we had the same thoughts in mind this week...

lorely said...

knowing everything you felt was wrong...Wow! That's a powerful admission...and yet we always kow, don't we? Just sometimes don't want to hear the answers...