Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Healing Water

It dried and the roses sheltered,
the vengeance settled with
prickles deep in sand.
End of the odyssey, end in bliss,
look out for the ship again rising.
Unmasked the shadows to
let end the ache, while
the healing water rains down the
sallow cheeks.
Forgiveness spread,
And all healed.


Susie Swanson said...

Just beautiful, Yes forgivness is the key. You are a very talented writer!

Monika said...

Oh thanks Susie for appreciating :)

Susie Swanson said...

I had to pop back one more time and thank you so much for your beautiful, heartfelt comments on mine.. I treasure them all..

Victoria said...

I like the flow of forgiveness here.