Sunday, November 13, 2011

Breath of life


The unoccupied hardwood
inhabiting the soul filled world
wants a mate or she says mates

for every man and every woman
and of course she says every object
is brimming with feelings

Posted for Magpie Tales

17 comments:

Other Mary said...

Oh, wonderful, in those few lines you've said so much... especially love the phrase 'brimming with feelings'

insanebloom said...

Nice one here! I like it!

christopher said...

and of course she says every object
is brimming with feelings


excellent!

Laurie Kolp said...

Stunning... I really like the first two lines.

Jo Bryant said...

really interesting where you went and took us along

Mama Zen said...

Nicely done!

R. Burnett Baker said...

"mates" ? You've given us options with this poem... It's sad, sweet, and provocative all at once!

Rick

Brian Miller said...

brimming is a cool word...heard it on xfactor the other night and we were commenting on it...everything having feelings...if only we treated as thus...

The Cello Strings said...

cool job.

Tumblewords: said...

Very nice!!

Carrie Burtt said...

"brimming with feelings"...what a brilliant piece! :-)

Susie Swanson said...

These few words are like a book.. You said it all.. Beautiful..Susie

Nicholas V. said...

A good take on this mysterious Magpie!

Dave King said...

An absolute truth not universally recognised.

Rohit said...

just happened to pass by.u'r a mesmerizing poet..i'm joining in with GFC..nice look & feel of the blog too!

chiccoreal said...

Monika: "every object is brimming with feelings"...this is vibrational information! Deeply spiritual :)

Publish Poetry said...

such a great read. :D