The green fallen all around
sometimes disturbs my eyes
sometimes disturbs my eyes
and I start
on a way wrong
till I see
the autumn moon
rise and do
the strings round
of my song one
time again.
The pleasant
pebbles light
like sapphires
in her neck,
for whom I’ve
been repelling
my tides and
spreading
like a serpent
permanent,
that queen
so blue and mine.
The yellow
shadows, a little
darker from
gold write her
feet onto
their faces flattened,
now smelling
her white gleam
so vigorous,
I kiss the icy
blue sands
on my way.
The woods
with a million colors
paint me her
pink palms
as I instrument
my tale and
my queen so fair,
into
a
kaleidoscope with beads
which sings
us in turn.
The voice
inside the skin
watches her
near but as
I run, she
pulls the valleys
away as far
as to go round
again, all
over the green and I
cant cease
but start again.
Writing prompt at Magpie tales
14 comments:
a journey of colour, beautiful
Beautifully done, nice response to the image.
I love the line "the pleaseant pebbles light like sapphires in her neck"
This is a lovely piece!
Wow, how lovely.
The mystical quality of this piece is different from any of the others I read in response to Tess' prompt photo. Your take is unique.
dynamic and fun.
a job well done.
Such feeling in all that color.....!
Beautiful!
a lot of beautiful lines... luv it!
JJRod'z
nice...what a beautiful journey you took us on in this...love that pulling of the valleys before you...starting again sounds like a great place to be you know...smiles.
Truly you dance with words, Monika. Thanks for sharing.
great journey Monika.....thanks for sharing your words
this is a colorful and lovely search in the woods....beautifully written!
Monika you have an amazing talent.....this is stunning! :-)
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