Read the first part Here.
Finally, she
gets them out, time over
you know and
her lusty voice fills the
sarcasm of
my ears with its buxom,
playful
mood, ready to shake the town,
make me
unmanageable. You wanna
come
over?The light drizzled in her mist,
breeze
tasted of her wine, the sky
tangled in
her locks, my heart cried.
A terrific
impulse struck me in bed,
like I run
with sound, even faster,
chose the
shirt last time she liked
and savoured
the glee in my eyes,
wild and
rash and careless, race
my
Porsche, my only love till I surrendered
in her arms
one day. In and out of
day
dreaming,stepped into her house.
Purple dim
background, and a white
goddess,
sitting among fireflies, I was
under the
moon, all that I wanted;
crossed the
forbidden ways to steal
her and find
a kingdom, to live in her
love. Must
be running booze, my father
said dryly,
when I recalled my love and
the
prohibited woman last hours.
You are a
respectful man but I am a
simple dog,
he had this ounce of disgust
but I
preferred my twisted life, in
her lap than
ruthless money mincing,
harassing
time with a false note and
being lowly
yet reverent. My life as a
dog is far
respectful than this respected
man and I
appreciate the sarcasm.
5 comments:
I know what it is to be itching to get to a "prohibited woman" and so this definitely speaks to me. I love love LOVE the ending. Woof! ;-)
I love this Monika, especially the ending..Susie
Kainde Loki Kay Lambviyan Ne Rawaan Ishq Diyaan…
Ki Dasawan Ki Baat Sunawan Ishq Diyaan…
Kanjri bania meri zaat na Ghat-dee, menu nach ke yaar manawan day
log ishq nu mul ginde, menu nach ke yaar manawan day,
Aaja Rab Nahi Rusda Soon Rab Di
They say that the path of love is very long
What should I tell you about love?
My stature does not diminish by being a (harlot/dance girl/wh0re)
Let me dance to win my love.
I swear to God that His God doesn’t get upset
BEAUTIFUL POEM.
Kudos,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Fireblossom, thanks! ;-)
Susie, I am glad you liked it.
Blasphemous Aesthete, its simply so sacred and beautiful. I loved your comment more than my poem.
thanks!
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